Thursday, April 21, 2011

The Great Easter Bunny Heist -- final part by Barbara Phinney

Richard shoved Mrs. Candy out of the way and dove in. All the regrets in his past engulfed him like the cold water. He reached out his hands, still unable to see, and his hands found something warm.

He grabbed it and pushed himself to the surface.

He got a fist in the face for his effort.

It wasn’t Ellie! It was some swarthy man with crooked teeth and a single, ugly unibrow. Fortunately, the man’s punch had been slowed by the water. Ignoring him, Richard dove back under in search of Ellie. He broke the surface a moment later, hating that this try was fruitless.

The ugly Russian was swinging back his arm again. Then, from nowhere it seemed, a huge iron hook bashed the man in the face and caught him under the chin.

Richard looked up, amazed. Mrs. Candy was using the anchor as a man-hook and her fishing skills were top-notch. She’d knocked the Russian senseless, and hooked him, too! And now, with amazing strength Richard knew would have to be God-given, she was hauling the unconscious man into the boat.

Ellie! Tossing aside all other thoughts, he dove again, praying as he hadn’t prayed in a very long time. Easter was coming, and a deep, needy part of him knew what new life really meant.

Save her, Lord!

When his lungs could stand the strain no more, he broke the surface again. He was tiring fast, and grabbed the side of the boat to catch his breath.

Through fogginess, he noted that Mrs. Candy had tied up the Russian with the anchor rope, then reached forward to snag her purse. Suddenly, she let out a whoop and grabbed the steering wheel of the boat. Standing, with her purse neatly over her arm like the Queen on her walkabout, she hit the gas.

Richard could barely hang on to the side and she maneuvered the boat through the water. “Are you nuts? Stop the boat! Ellie’s down there!”

“No! Look!”

Richard twisted about, spying Ellie as she broke the surface of the water near the far shore. Shoving himself away, he swam with renewed strength toward her.

He caught Ellie just as she dipped below the water again. He tried to swim back, but found he could touch bottom. Encouraged, he pushed closer to the shore, until Ellie’s limp frame found the bottom, too.

She fell deeper into his arms.

“No! Ellie, you’re not going to die on me. Listen, look at me! I let you go five years ago because I was stupid, but I’m not going to let you go now. So stay with me, Ellie. I love you!”

She blinked up at him. A smile grew on her features and she banged her head on his chest.

Much later, still on shore, with the sun beating warmly on them, and the police on their way across the water, Ellie huddled closer. “Were you really going to let the egg and the spy go, all for me?”

“Absolutely. I let my work get between us before and I learned how stupid that was.”

“And I have realized that I was selfish to demand so much of you. God taught me that. Just in time for Easter, I’d say.”

“Do you still like chocolate?”

She looked up at him, perplexed by his question. “Of course.”

“Good, because I’m going to give you a much better Easter Egg Hunt than the one we’ve been on. Every Easter from now on, right after church. For the rest of our lives.”

“God, chocolate, and the man I love. Nothing could be better.”

Blessed Easter, all!

11 comments:

Debby Giusti said...

What a great ending, Barbara! I'm smiling! Love it!

Love the pics, too. Why that Mrs. Candy is amazing!!!

Happy Easter to all and may all your dreams come true!

PamelaTracy said...

Ahhhh.
Happy Easter everyone!

Cara Putman said...

what a great wrap-up to a fun story!

Leann said...

I love the ending. Good job, Barbara

Barbara Phinney said...

I love that pic of Mrs. Candy! What a scream it was to find it.
And as I read the story, I was awed and a little scared that I could keep up with all that great writing! But we sure had fun.
Any readers out there who have thoughts, just tell us. Want another, or have an idea, just let us know.
Blessings,
Barbara

Terri Reed said...

So fun!!! Love the last line. Great ahhhh factor!

Lisa Mondello said...

Fantastic wrap up, Barbara! LOVED that picture of Mrs. Candy with the purse!!

Lenora said...

Great ending. That was fun. Happy Easter to all.

Lee Smith said...

What a fun story. I loved the pictures too. Have a wonderful Easter.

Debby Giusti said...

Happy Easter to all!

Barbara Phinney said...

Thank you everyone for all the great comments.
Our Good Friday service was so touching with some of the congregation acting out the song, Watch The Lamb.
Tomorrow is a great day to celebrate, and I wish you all a wonderful, blessed Easter.